Posted by: Matt | July 23, 2007

Review of The Sounds of Butteflies

The Sound of ButterfliesThe Sound of Butterflies
Rachael King
2006

Reason for reading: I received this book through the HarperCollins First Look program. It will be available October 1 of this year. It was favorably compared to Heart of Darkness which I enjoyed so decided to give it a try.

Quote: (Forthcoming)

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In the early 1900s, Thomas Edgar takes advantage of an opportunity to travel to Brazil to further his hobby of collecting butterflies. There is rumor of an undocumented butterfly living deep in the Amazon which Thomas hopes will bring him fame and fortune. After searching the Amazon for months he returns home to England unwilling to speak. The horrors he has witnessed in the rainforest have forever changed him and it is left to his wife to unbind his tongue.

The story is told in turns by alternating between Thomas’s time in Brazil and the present in which he has returned mute to England. Of these two narratives, the past in which Thomas searches the Amazon is much more interesting. This is where the author seems to have a better feel for the direction of the novel.

King has set a good tone in the book but breaks the mood several times throughout. At certain points she writes of erotic situations in crude terms that are oddly out of character with the rest of the novel. It is not so much the presence of sexual situations but the way in which they are handled. She also includes a flashback to Thomas’s childhood which interrupts the stories narrative flow. It is not clear why King thought it necessary to include this jaunt back to his past and it is not explored in any depth.

The path the author takes to the end is intriguing but the finish is too rushed. It is not known what has caused Thomas to become silent until the last tenth of the book. This is a bit too late for the situation to feel sufficiently terrible to cause such a drastic reaction in the lead character. This part of the story could have used more fleshing out.

This is Rachael King’s debut novel and at times it is evident as she works to tie the story together without being trite. However, overall the book is a decent first effort. All of the elements needed for a good novel appear, she only need refine her writing and pacing.

Rating: 2.75

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Responses

  1. I am not sure this is someone that I would want to read. I did like heart of darkness though.

  2. Kelly – The book was okay, it just needed a bit more polish. And I seem to be the only one in my family that likes Heart of Darkness for some reason…

  3. May I take this opportunity to ask you something about the First Look program? I signed up and picked the books I was interested in, and heard nothing at all. Do you think it’s just that I have to wait til the next month’s round of books? How do they contact you if you’re picked for a book?

  4. Dew – Each book has a date on which the period for requesting it ends. Usually that is around the 3rd day of the following month. Most of the books available right now end on the 3rd of August. On that day they draw names for who will receive the book. A day or two after that they email you telling you whether or not you were chosen. So you find out either way. Hope that helps!

  5. Oh, ok! Thanks. I think I thought that was the publishing date. I’ll hope I get at least one on the third, then! Do you usually get at least one every month? I guess that probably depends on how many areas of interest you checked, huh? I checked most of them!

  6. Dew – This was actually the first month I’ve done it so I was surprised to get a book. I have requested two more books for this next month so we’ll see if I get either of those. And I think you can sign up for any book even if you didn’t check the box for that particular type.


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